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Adult Nursing Personal Statement

A personal statement applying for Adult Nursing, talking about their relevant extracurricular activities and work experience.

Nursing is a very challenging and demanding career, however I feel the rewards would be great and that I am ready to embark on this career. I am eager to pursue a career in which I am able to help and care for people, becoming a nurse would allow me to fulfil this ambition. Nursing is a career for dedicated, reliable, trusting people who are able to develop relationships with patients quickly. I have these skills and I genuinely want to make a difference to people, to assist them and their families through difficult times when they are at their most vulnerable. The role of nursing is changing as nurses are far more involved in the welfare of patients and this is placing more responsibility on nurses. I am confident of embracing this challenge and to take advantage of these changes and opportunities and use them to further my career.

At school I am involved in the Duke of Edinburgh scheme and have completed bronze and silver levels. Aspects of the Duke of Edinburgh involved working as part of a group, this has helped me become an effective team player which I believe will be useful in the nursing environment as it will be necessary to use this strength to communicate successfully with other health professionals to determine what level of care is best for a patient. I am also involved in the music department as part of two choirs and a guitar group. I perform learning support once a week with a girl with additional support needs. This involves undertaking activities with her and supporting her to communicate difficulties when she is finding things challenging. This is very rewarding as I can see what a difference it makes for her to have someone who is willing to listen, and has made me realise how important this skill is when caring for people. Another activity I find rewarding is performing in-class support with a second year science class.

I am a young leader at Aberlady Rainbows and Guides and this is very valuable to me as I interact with the girls and participate in activities with them. It has greatly increased my confidence as I often have to talk to the girls in a group setting and this has developed my interpersonal skills. I am also involved in the peer education scheme '4' which involves going to different Guiding units and raising awareness of issues through activities and games. This has been incredibly beneficial for my confidence and my planning and organisational skills. These skills have been developed as I have to co-ordinate the sessions as well as talking to a group of people that I am not familiar with. As one of only two in4mers in East Lothian this role is very demanding.

I have been employed as a waitress for three years in the local hotel. This has been excellent for my interpersonal skills as it involves talking to people I am not familiar with. A skill that will be transferable to nursing. I have also undertaken work experience, through school, at Harlawhill Day Care Centre. This gave me a useful insight into the caring profession and has increased my motivation to work within it. I organised my own work experience at the Edington Cottage Hospital and this gave me an idea of what working in a hospital setting will be like. Both experiences served to fuel my desire to gain entry to the nursing profession. I also plan to work as a nursing auxiliary through the nurse bank next summer.

In the future I may wish to pursue a career in Paediatric nursing and I feel that an adult nursing degree will be the first step in giving me this opportunity. I am deeply passionate about nursing and I am already looking forward to a long and fulfilling career in this field. I am the first person in my family to pursue further education.

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This personal statement was written by laura257 for application in 2008.


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Wow! by guest at 11:44 25/10/2007

I really want to become a nurse but i've been ill for three years with a stress related illness which has stopped me getting much experience. I'm worried now i won't excepted but thank you for letting me see your example it was a great help!

Thankyou by guest at 15:21 26/10/2007

I have read your statement and have noted a few lines of yours, hope you dont mind im not too good and writing.

thanks by guest at 18:05 26/10/2007

I'm doing a 'career portfolio' and was really stuck on my personal statement. Thanks for sharing yours, it gave me an idea of where I need to start.

Comment by guest at 18:13 26/10/2007

really good. thanks

Comment by guest at 02:28 28/10/2007

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Very good but I still don't know where to start

Comment by guest at 13:39 29/10/2007

Really great personal statement, thank you. x

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I wasn't sure on how to start my personal statement and if i even wanted to be a nurse but reading this has made be sure that this is the path i want to go down so thank you!

Comment by guest at 08:55 1/11/2007

Brilliant! It has gave me a few ideas of what to write, thanks for sharing =) xXx

inspirational by guest at 22:41 3/11/2007

I have found it extremely difficult to find a starting point to my personal statement but after reading yours it has really helped me to begin and it just started to flow when i knew what to write. thanks!

thankyou by guest at 09:26 5/11/2007

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Comment by guest at 09:15 7/11/2007

this is a similar career path to what i want to do, (paramedic) so thanks for the example on helping me with my statement.

thanx by guest at 17:52 7/11/2007

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Thanks letting me see an example of a personal statement, it was a great help :) thanks

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thank you, your persenal statment helped me alot ...

Comment by guest at 20:14 8/11/2007

if only we had more people like you, reading your statement really helped me thank you, my tutor had stressed me out so much about my personal statement and you made it easier thanks again xxx

Thank You by guest at 20:56 12/11/2007

laura, my namesake, thank you. you have really helped me compose my satement. something ive struggled with for over 12 months!!!! thank you

Comment by guest at 15:36 13/11/2007

thank you for shairng your personal statement as i want to a follow a career in midwifery and this sent my mind racing with ideas as to what to include in mine, so thanx very much x

Comment by guest at 20:24 13/11/2007

Was a great help, shame there aren't more! Thanks x

sowi for coping lol by guest at 23:57 13/11/2007

heya i copied ur first paragraph but ima changing a bit a8 fanks alot

thanks!!!! by guest at 15:59 15/11/2007

aw hi thanks alot dot was pure class!!!! i was really worried bout ritin mine but uve helpd me loads hope you dnt mind if i tak bits out bt der too good not to!!!!! tanx again xxxx

Impressive statement ! by guest at 20:34 15/11/2007

Thanks for the sneaky peek.You sound like you'll make a great nurse. Best of luck !

thanx billion times by guest at 21:04 16/11/2007

you have really made my day, i had no clue on how to state. thanx again

=D.unki by guest at 15:26 17/11/2007

I was so stuck all my m8s hve alredy riten their statemnts nd i ad no clu hw 2 strt urs hlpd me alot,thnk u. al th best wth ur career.

Comment by guest at 20:23 20/11/2007

very good

Comment by guest at 14:53 21/11/2007

Wow thank you so much for the help! I was totally struggling until I found this you've given me inspiration for my own personal statement. Thanks :) xxx

Comment by guest at 16:37 25/11/2007

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don't copy cheats by guest at 12:26 27/11/2007

this is a really amazing personal statement and laura has done a great job.It was very generous of her to put it online but i am disappointed that some unfair cheats are copying it. It is brilliant to use this for inspiration but write your own statment and don't be lazy.

Comment by guest at 21:15 30/11/2007

hi guys this personal statement website is excellent for advising people about how to go about their personal statement but please please dont copy them as UCAS have the technology to to scan people's personal statements which can be linked to websites and can actually decline an application for plagiarism! just a tip

Comment by guest at 18:34 2/12/2007

Blessed!!! you personal statement is not just good but an inspiration. exactelly what I was looking for to help me write mine. Thank you for sharing.

Twisted by guest at 22:10 2/12/2007

Thanks so much for sharing this, it's a really good personal statement and I learnt from it! Goodluck for the future!

so good by guest at 23:44 3/12/2007

it a wow many thanks

thank you by guest at 22:33 4/12/2007

Did not know where to start with writing a personal statement - thank you for sharing yours, it has been a great help.

Thanks!!!!!!!!! by guest at 10:41 5/12/2007

Thanks for donating you personal statement!!its a help!!

Comment by guest at 20:49 10/12/2007

this is absolutely brilliant, thankyou so much.

thanks hun ! by guest at 14:19 11/12/2007

thank you this was a great help. i have really struggled with getting started and now after looking at yours i am on a role cheers xxx

Comment by guest at 01:09 12/12/2007

thanks for sharing ur statement i thought it was really good an gave me some great ideas for my own!!!!!!!!

kirsty by guest at 12:06 17/12/2007

this statement is really good!! thank u

Comment by guest at 16:38 19/12/2007

Very well written and seems honest, a great help!

Comment by guest at 19:50 5/01/2008

What a fab personal statement. I have been trying to write mine for weeks now and yours gave me the inspiration to finish it off and know i was on the right lines. Thanks

Wow! by guest at 13:09 7/01/2008

This personal statement was really good and helped me structure my dtatement better! Thank you!

Comment by guest at 13:52 7/01/2008

many thanks.I've been able to see 'more of me' since reading your points which has greatly helped. x

delmmy by guest at 19:20 10/01/2008

this is a great personal statment! thank you so much for sharing it!

Thank You by guest at 21:46 12/01/2008

Really was having a problem then read your statement and gained the courage to carry on. Thank you again.

Comment by guest at 01:51 15/01/2008

nicely written. wishing you the best of luck! ^_^

abi by guest at 03:08 15/01/2008

this is a very good one am goind to use some of it for my statment well done

Thankyou by guest at 18:49 15/01/2008

What a great help this as been,ur an absolute star hun!! I was so stressed out before i found this. Good luk wid nursing n ope u go on to get da job u want. x

Comment by guest at 06:39 16/01/2008

thank you for sharing this wonderful personal really helped me a lot in my career..thanks Godbless

Comment by guest at 15:02 22/01/2008

A really good personal statement! This is the second time I've had to write a personal statement - I study tourism at uni now, and have decided its just not for me - and it doesn't get any easier the second time round!! So well done on this attempt!! i hope you get accepted into your chosen course :) x

thank you by guest at 00:59 28/01/2008

i'm also doing my personal statement, thanks for sharing yours..i also quoted few lines in your statement because i am not that good in writing..thanks again!

VERY HELPFUL by guest at 18:12 31/01/2008


Thanx.. by guest at 22:34 11/03/2008

Hey, this is really great, i love the first paragraph think i am going to use it. Thanx alot good luck!

Comment by guest at 15:16 12/03/2008

I am planning on applying for uni next year i too am the first in the family to pursue this. I was terrified of making such a fool of my self on my statment but reading yours has giveen such confidence to try again. thankyou

Comment by guest at 11:10 13/03/2008

very good statement, thanks for the idea.

how can i write my personal statement by guest at 16:34 15/03/2008

am nurse and would like to continue my study in uk in oncology speciatlty and i dont know how to stat my statement .plze help me

very aspiring by guest at 23:06 15/03/2008

i was just in the middle of writting my statement when i thought of sighting a few examples luckly for me, i found i have to start all over. i can assure you will be a good role modle in your family. keep it up, you have a future. thanks

Fab! by guest at 12:20 31/03/2008

Thank u for sharing your statement its now kick started me to do mine!

very helpful by guest at 11:01 8/04/2008

thank you .it was really helpful..

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You're statement has really helped...Thanks! Now i know where to begin!

Comment by guest at 16:39 23/04/2008

Thank you it really has helped.

Comment by guest at 23:33 23/04/2008

Thanks i had no idea how to start.May God contuine to bless you

Superb! by guest at 18:27 25/04/2008

I really appreciate your effort to contribute such a simple but effective personal statement. Its very helpful. Thanks for guiding

Comment by guest at 23:41 27/05/2008

a very good statment

thank you by guest at 19:48 25/06/2008

I am just finishing my port folio and the personal statement was filling me with dread,your example was brilliant,thank you for sharing xx

Comment by guest at 20:55 30/06/2008

Brilliant! Many Thnx (=

Thank you by guest at 18:35 16/07/2008

have to say was so stuck on what to write thank you for the brain motivation cause its not easy to hype your self up thanks you

Thank you! by guest at 02:28 31/07/2008

Your personal statement has been extremely useful in guiding me. I didn't know where to begin but thanks to you, I am on my way to writing a great personal statement. Thank you so much!

Comment by guest at 20:36 1/08/2008

thanx i was really stuck on what they would expect to write in our personal statements but reading yours really helped me with how it should be done

Comment by guest at 15:30 4/08/2008

thank you for this it really helped!!! i have been able to finsh my P.S. for university now! :D thanks

nurse by guest at 20:39 4/08/2008

thanks this was amazing really helped your a star xxx

Excellent by guest at 16:08 23/08/2008

You have very generously helped a lot of people including me, thanks a lot and good luck to everyone x

Thank you by guest at 16:01 1/09/2008

This has been a great help with my opening paragraph, thanks for all your help :)

Comment by guest at 14:05 2/09/2008

did you get into uni using this personal statement?

Comment by guest at 22:15 6/09/2008

It is too wordy and distracts from the main points that the author wants to express.

thank you. . x by guest at 21:34 7/09/2008

your personal statement was really great help thanks a lot! i've been struggling on how to start it and looking at yours made it very easy for me! it also made me very sure about choosing this career! x x x x thanks again

Comment by guest at 21:57 17/09/2008

thanks x x i found this a great help as i really never knew where to start first your statement looked so professional hope mine can to!

Thanks by guest at 09:49 23/09/2008

Im currently studying health and social care in college and i reli want to do peadiatric nursing. Thanks for your personal statement it reli helped me.x

Comment by guest at 15:42 24/09/2008

this is really useful. i have been working on my statement for the past month and had no idea what to put in it. thanks. its really good.

Comment by guest at 10:26 25/09/2008

Thank you so much for sharing your statement, i found it very helpful

Comment by guest at 18:14 2/10/2008

This is an amazing personal statement, it has really given me a good starting! Thanks for sharing it :)

Comment by guest at 15:12 4/10/2008

Cheers for letting me have a look - hopefully i can start mine - only problem i know what i want to say but i just cant write it on paper!!

Comment by guest at 15:01 7/10/2008

you have sucha gud statement, it helps alot! thanxz! all d besttt....

cool by guest at 13:23 8/10/2008

i like your statement thanks it helped me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Diljeet by guest at 13:25 8/10/2008

hi this is diljeet and i really like your essay me going univastaty the oxford one and me copy your one and they give me interview as you helped me can you please help me with interview? me number is 01273 456542

Thankyou by guest at 13:52 8/10/2008

Thank you for sharing this comment, I found this really useful as I will be applying for University soon and I needed to start my personal statement asap. I helped me gain an understandin on how to start it and set one out. So thanks again. x x x

Comment by guest at 11:37 9/10/2008

THANX I have been struggling on this for a bit now an ive found this really helpful. Its got my brain ticking now lol

Comment by guest at 11:12 10/10/2008

thankyou it was so helpful to read this as i am really srtuggling to write my midwifery personal statement. it is very well constructed and interesting to read. a great help thankyou xxx Shauna

Comment by guest at 14:26 20/10/2008

Thankyou very much this is a brilliant personal statement and help me on the right tracks what to write. Thankyou again x

thanks by guest at 14:17 23/10/2008

hi thanks, i have just i a look at your personal statement. i found it really helpful, i have been struggling on starting mine,but now no where and how to begin. thanks alot a good luck with your career.

Comment by guest at 11:27 26/10/2008

thanks for letting us all have a wee swatch at a personal statement for nursing as the schools aren't really prepared for it and don't have any helpful notes so it was VERY helpful to see yours. thanks again. xxxx

thanks alot by guest at 16:09 30/10/2008

thank you so much for this my friends have done thers and i was reli struggling. it wasnt stuff to write about my self it was what to include i was struggling with! so thanks alot!!! :-)

Comment by guest at 19:05 30/10/2008

This was a very god personal statement and i think alot of us have benefited from it :D Thanks again!! x

Comment by guest at 14:22 2/11/2008

thank you for sharing, best example I have seen so far!x

smile by guest at 12:02 3/11/2008

thank lds ur a star lol

Comment by guest at 16:05 3/11/2008

i am young girl who aged 18 years old i would like to become a nurse i am learning in health and social care i thing it`s easy but i am not friendly

fantastic by guest at 16:14 3/11/2008

iam saamiyah i live in england i am student at college of north east london i study health and social care i get upset when i first started but now i am like a teacher i am not really teacher just like and i hope to be come anurse

thanx found this very useful by guest at 12:33 5/11/2008

Very goood by guest at 15:47 12/11/2008

Thank you so much 4 sharing this with us!! Realy helped and its really good xx

Comment by guest at 10:29 13/11/2008

Its alrite like nothing special

thank u by guest at 18:54 16/11/2008

this really helped me get started! thanks!

God Bless by guest at 00:08 17/11/2008

thanks your personal statement really helped me

Comment by guest at 15:04 20/11/2008

thank you. this has helped alot.

Comment by guest at 18:41 23/11/2008

hi i found this statement so much help in finishing my statement and good luck in your future career thanks

Janine by guest at 17:49 27/11/2008

Thank you that was really helpful. i hope to do nursing next year but was really struggling with what to say. urs is really well written, u seem to have loads of experience! thanks very much xxx

Amazing by guest at 18:19 30/11/2008

Hello I just read your personal statement and its really good i wish you the best success in your life you will go far! Lots of love Natasha xxxxx

Thanks by guest at 03:41 1/12/2008

Thanks you so much for sharing your personal statement. I was was suck in starting mine and yours helped facilitate the starting points that I needed. It was truly a blessing for me. Thanks again.

Great by guest at 14:59 3/12/2008

Thank you. It was really useful and has helped me with a starting point. thanks once a again x

Comment by guest at 18:36 8/12/2008

Thanks for sharing your personal statement, like many people I was stuck with starting mine. Yours has really has helped me out. So once again, thank you!

Comment by guest at 21:50 11/12/2008

what an excelent personal statement, thanks for yr help. all the best for yr future x

Comment by guest at 10:11 15/12/2008

i found this statement really really helpful thanks! wish u all th best!

good on you by guest at 14:16 15/12/2008

Great by guest at 19:31 26/12/2008

Thanks dis helped i definitely ave an idea of wat to write!

Comment by guest at 18:37 5/01/2009

this statement show's some promise. However it does go on abit in some places and overstates emotions.

amazing job! by guest at 19:32 5/01/2009

Great Statement, got me out of my "block" Please use this as an inspiration piece, do not copy her work, make it your own. Thanks Laura now I have a much clearer idea of a starting point and development of ideas.

Comment by guest at 14:27 20/01/2009

did you get in?

Comment by guest at 13:10 23/01/2009

i have been out of education for a few years now looking after my mum wit cancer. your personal statement has helped me out so much... i was mind boggled , out of practice writing essays. thankyou x

Comment by guest at 22:13 28/01/2009

Fabulous, just what I needed. I can't get past the first line. Hope you managed to get in. Thanks.

it really help by guest at 13:46 6/02/2009

u are such a wonderful person it indeed help me.

thanks by guest at 16:36 3/03/2009

this statement has really helped me think of some of my own expereiences that i forgot about and also bought into perspective how easy it is to write a personal statement when you have a great one infront of you to give a guideline how to start the bloody thing thanks alot it was a real help XXXxxxxXXXX

Comment by guest at 12:27 3/04/2009

Thanx helped me get started x

Comment by guest at 15:59 6/04/2009

good statement. it is actually social work i want 2 study and havent been able to find a personal statement in that field but your statement has helped me construct my own statement especially your intro and the skills and activities you have participated in. thank you

Comment by guest at 18:14 10/05/2009

thank you SO much for posting this, i've been agonising over my personal statement for weeks! good luck with your nursing career! M x

can you please delete this by guest at 20:48 14/06/2009

my brothes girlfriend used some of it and shes been caught

Comment by guest at 11:51 14/07/2009

If she copied it outright she deserves to get caught. Use it for ideas not copy and paste, idiot. Anyway, good personal statement, very useful.

Comment by guest at 12:04 21/07/2009

thanks, it is really helpful

Comment by guest at 18:42 17/08/2009

hy, i am not sure if i am strong enough to be a nurse. I am passionate about this job role however dont feel i am strong enough.

this is so helpful by guest at 07:12 9/09/2009

i had no idea how to really set out my personal statement but yours gave me a good idea of how i could set it out thank you XD

Comment by guest at 06:14 16/09/2009

WOW!!! your personal statement is wicked!!! its helped me plan mine out thank for adding it up tc xxxxxxxxx

Comment by guest at 12:36 17/09/2009

This is realy good! thanks! :)

:) by guest at 17:28 22/09/2009

Welldone that's really good! i'mthe only person i know doing nursing and reallly needed some ideas! this is very good! thankyou

Great help!!!! by guest at 19:57 23/09/2009

I was struggling to start my personal statement but since reading yours it has triggered apart of my brain I didnt think worked!!! Thank you very much!!!!!

Comment by guest at 13:08 12/10/2009

thank you so much, your personal statement has helped me to get started. leanne x

Thanks by guest at 09:35 29/10/2009

This Personal Statement is really good. It helped me alot with my Personal Statement. Thanks again xx

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cool statement! by guest at 19:28 10/01/2010

thanks this really helped i used it as a rough guideline for my statement! x

Comment by guest at 18:45 14/01/2010

you are amazing thanks so so much i was stressed out till i read yours its a fantastic help your a star xxx

That was really helpful by guest at 15:31 9/02/2010

very good. I feel better now

personal statement by guest at 16:59 10/02/2010

hi there, i have just read your personal statement and i thought it was amazing, everything i was thinking in my head but in so much more detail and brilliant wording, i hope you dont mind but i used a few of your lines to fit into my CV, i would love to be a nurse some day, i keep applying for auxilary positions and i have not heard back off any of them, and in time i am hoping to enroll for the nursing course at preston university! Thank you so much for posting your personal statement to help others, i really hope you have got the career you yearned for, you do deserve it, many thanks Claire xx

Thanks by guest at 20:04 27/03/2010

Thank you for shareing youre personal statment its very good good luck to you with everything you do x

Comment by guest at 19:03 29/05/2010

I've thought about applying for uni for over a year, and kept putting it off, simply because I didnt have a clue where to start with my personal statement..THANK YOU!!!

Comment by guest at 22:03 4/07/2010

i really want to get into the career of nursing except i have only decided this, and have not gt the relevant work experience, i only have the time of this summer. can yu please advise me what to do please?

Comment by guest at 10:03 23/07/2010

This is briiiiiiilliant. I just fell in love with it. Thank you so much for posting your personal statement, what a difference it made for me .God bless.

nurse by guest at 12:26 21/08/2010

Very nice goal statement

Comment by guest at 13:56 23/08/2010

thank you for your help, iam going to apply to be a pediatric nurse, i did my nvq3 childcare and i worked as a nursery office, but my dream is to be a pediatric nurse. jenny

Comment by guest at 19:37 31/08/2010

How long do personal statments have to be?

Comment by guest at 14:03 27/09/2010

There's no minimum length but they can't be more than 47 lines or 4000 characters.

thank you by guest at 22:48 28/09/2010

your personal statement has helped me a lot thank you so much

Comment by guest at 18:54 29/09/2010

such a life saver! i had no idea where to start and this has given me some really good ideas :)

Immii by at 2010-09-29 23:06:09

Myyy GODDD! (In relief)- your such a big help!! And thank you for sharing your own, its very helpful indeed. Reading your personal statement made me feel more comfortable then worried; as i had no idea what to write before. Your such a life saver!!! thanks! :)

FAB :0) by guest at 22:41 8/10/2010

This has helped me get an idea, thanx xxx

thanks alot. by guest at 13:09 10/10/2010

your personal statement really helped me. thank you x

Wow!!!! Lovely personal statement by guest at 14:22 22/10/2010

I am really so glad to read this statement as it contains what I was looking for my statement as year3 student nurse. I say thanks to the person who contriputed it.

thankz! by guest at 11:30 9/11/2010

thanks alot for putting your personal statement on.i realy appreciate it. Its so nice to meet such good people like yourself.

Comment by guest at 14:39 11/11/2010

thanx so much, help alot didnt have a clue whot to put in but it realy help me xxx

Comment by guest at 11:15 24/11/2010

Thank you nurse! Helped me alot.

Comment by guest at 12:10 15/02/2011

brilliant well done! sounds very professional! i have taken notes on my statement for my first nursing job... thanks for your help!

wow! by guest at 12:25 5/07/2011

this is actually the best personal statement

Good Statement by guest at 05:02 27/07/2011

I have been searching for ideas and help in my nursing school application. This is the best letter I have found! Thank you for posting it, it has been very helpful.

thanks by guest at 09:00 24/09/2011

i needed something to give me a head start,im grateful

Comment by guest at 19:14 27/09/2011

Thank you so much, big help! Didn't know how hard it would be to write a Personal Statement, so thanks again!

Comment by guest at 20:27 12/10/2011

Thankyou very much for posting this, it has really helped me get ideas on how to write what i want to say :)

WOW!! by guest at 12:36 20/11/2011

That was really inspiring to me and it gave some real pointers on how to go about filling up my UCAS Personal Statement in Nursing!!! Thank You, Thank You, Thank You!!!

vOGatebLKV by guest at 21:54 20/03/2012

I loved your blog post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

thankyou by guest at 10:48 9/07/2012

wow seriosuly you have saved my life, and hope you do well in your life, and thank you, this was so usefull and has helped me a lot... and good luck with your nursing career.

Comment by guest at 22:42 10/09/2012

Your statement is quite useful to students especially those of us who want be in nursing proffession. Well done

Thank you for sharing! by guest at 01:52 8/11/2012

Your example really did help me in developing my own personal statement for my professional portfolio for Nursing.

Comment by guest at 11:48 21/11/2012

"Nursing is a very challenging and demanding career" is one of the 10 most overused opening sentences in personal statements according to UCAS!

Not Credible! by guest at 17:50 7/11/2013

I would not employ this person. These are clichés which centre around what she finds rewarding. It is repetitive and dull. The age-old adage in writing of "show, not tell" holds good here. What makes a good possible nurse is not just commitment (and you can't prove this by going on about it) but the influences which have gone into your life as well as your experiences. Commitment is a "given" and "rewarding" is implicit. Better to reveal the type of person you actually are..

Comment by guest at 19:26 7/07/2014

copied ur last paragraph, thanx ur statement has been of much help.....thanx 4 posting