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Politics Personal Statement Example 19
I live in Pakistan-a country destroying itself with bombs, guns and governments' blabber to find justifications for what it is going through; a country where a former president is murdered in public,where the nation's constitution and parliament are suspended at the same time,and where the voice of a common man is unheard.
Since the last few years, I had aspired to become a doctor.The idea of "scalpels," "opened chests" and "sutures" had always intrigued me.
And then it happened!
The recent unprecedented events in my country wiped off the dust of disillusionment from my eyes; I lost my will to become a doctor. However,the turmoil in the country led me towards newspapers and news channels,and hence Politics.
As I involved myself into politics,I realized that it is all-embracive-wielding its way over social and economic life-it is the omnipotent of Pakistan.It can mobilize public opinion,gear up propaganda machinery, make or repeal laws and what not.
Backed up by public opinion,supported by the majority of the legislators, armed with the means to keep the people in a state of ignorance, political power crosses the limits of dictatorial powers.Political power,like the most powerful intoxicant,makes the persons in power to forget social ethics,political morality and obligations.
Most of the learned youth in this country consider Politics to be "a refuge for the scoundrels" and this derogatory remark may be true if we look at the deceptive and degenerated type of politicians indulging in a dirty game.
All these political parties are votaries of democracy,but the way they conduct themselves inside their own parties is nothing but senseless authoritarianism.Therefore a very few students choose to pursue Politics as a profession,but what they don't realize is that if we don't take a stand the system can never be changed.
Thus,I want to study Politics so I can come back to my country and contribute what little I can do for my homeland and its people.
If I can inspire even a single person,it would be worth it.The world today is growing global.We are now not only to think of our own nation but as and when we think of it,we have to keep the international perception in mind;consequently,I chose Politics with International Relations as one of my courses.
Studying in UK will breed a sense of individuality and self reliance.I would be able to interact with people from everywhere and get to know about their culture.
This would not only open new horizons for me,but would also clear some preconceived notions one has about the other.I have always been an active participant of debates.I have participated in 3 Model UN conferences out of which I was awarded with the Best Delegate award in two.
I was also one of the two students to be selected from my school to participate in the English Speaking Union '08.Moreover, I've taken part in Parliamentary style debates too.Therefore I believe I can communicate effectively in public and language will not be a barrier in my education.
Furthermore, I have worked as an internee at Al-Shifa Eye Hospital for a month in summers. Here I learnt how to deal with patients,use the Auto Ref, handle files and punctuality.
We also campaigned to a remote area near Murree where we helped the doctors in examining the patients free of cost. Another experience which taught me a lot was when me and my fellow colleagues volunteered to paint walls for the SOS Children's Village.In addition,I worked with SUNGI (NGO) where a group of 5 of us had to organize an event to pay tribute to 1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize.
I enjoy Literature,especially the works of Shakespeare,Tennessee Williams,Thomas Hardy and Andrew Marvell.
I'd be delighted to study in a challenging atmosphere where I can focus on my studies.I commit to my work and my ability to think out of the box,keenness for Politics and my perception of things,I understand,gives me an edge over others.I believe in myself,and if provided with an opportunity,I'd make the university proud.
This personal statement was written by Ozy for application in 2009.
Warwick: Accepted (Insurance)
York: Accepted (Declined)
SOAS: Accepted (Firm)
its simply amazing, one of
Sat, 24/01/2009 - 19:38
its simply amazing, one of the best ive read so far.
Did u receive any offer? i
Thu, 29/01/2009 - 16:29
Did u receive any offer? i reli like this statement, impressive i must say.
Um. To be honest, not
Tue, 24/02/2009 - 17:14
Um. To be honest, not surprised you got rejected from Durham. What you say in the statement is OK, but the grammar is HORRENDOUS.
Can you please spot any
Fri, 27/02/2009 - 18:58
Can you please spot any grammatical error?
You know youre just jealous, because even if you had 7 lifetimes you cant produce a piece half as good as this.:)
And I made it to SOAS too.
Fri, 27/02/2009 - 18:59
And I made it to SOAS too.
I hve seen better to be
Wed, 04/03/2009 - 16:14
I hve seen better to be honest look at your grammer its BAD
Reading your personal
Thu, 19/03/2009 - 22:56
Reading your personal statement, I dont think you're in any position to comment on anyone's. Secondly, I dont mind taking criticism if only you spot to me what the errors are. Go through it again, highlight the "grammatical errors" and let me know. Thanks.
I would suggest to all those
Tue, 28/04/2009 - 06:11
I would suggest to all those writing comments to be consturctive and encourage those who submit their statments. In the meantime do assist them in pointing out the erorrs rather than passing remarks.
I found the statment very well written and close to the fact. This is also because i lived in Pakistan as an Afghan refugee and i can understand what they have gone through. Good luck.
"even if you had 7 lifetimes
Sun, 10/01/2010 - 14:43
"even if you had 7 lifetimes you cant produce a piece half as good as this."
Hardly seems an appropriate response to a comment on the grammatical accuracy of your piece. You act as if he personally insulted you, and suggested you had no right to an education.
I did like the statement, it interested me greatly and has helped me think of an approach to take to my own. However, claiming your superiority over someone because they dared to point out a flaw is hardly an admirable trait.
okay so the grammar is not
Wed, 10/02/2010 - 13:22
okay so the grammar is not great, but it does read well and kept me interested throughout - well done!
the best i've seen so far!
Tue, 06/04/2010 - 16:57
the best i've seen so far! good job!
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