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Law and Criminology/Sociology Personal Statement

From a young age, I have been fascinated by law and was thrilled at the possibility of studying it at A-Level. In August 2007, I was able to spend two weeks working at Neves Solicitors in Luton. Most of my time was spent in the Conveyancing department, where Andrew Orriss, a partner in the firm, taught me how to draw up commercial leases and business contracts, and about buying, selling and renting residential properties. I most enjoyed meeting clients and discussing their cases. I found that moving house many times as a child enabled me to be sympathetic and relate to the clients. My time at Neves has made me more intent on pursuing a career in the law, as I liked the work and fitted in well with the staff.

I believe my current studies of Law, English Language and History complement each other well and would give me an advantage at university, as they have furthered my strong reading and writing abilities, and taught me to be more logical and investigative. I also took Religious Studies at AS-level as I like learning about other peoples' beliefs, and it helped me to become more open-minded.

I enjoy getting involved with activities in my Sixth Form, such as planning the Summer Ball in Year 12. I was chosen by our Deputy Head Girl to take the minutes for the meetings and email them to the other committee members, and my minutes were commended by my Head of Year. I was also asked to assist with the Sixth Form Induction Evening. My duties involved welcoming prospective students and their parents, handing out prospectuses, and talking to them about my own experiences of Sixth Form. In Year 13, I was chosen as a History subject mentor to help struggling Year 12 students, and I also helped out on a trip to Germany with students in years 7 to 9.

Outside of school, my hobbies include photography, bass guitar, and writing. In 2006, I came second in a BBC writing competition for young people in Northamptonshire. Having grown up in France, I am bilingual, and my next challenge is to write a short story in French. I also have a part-time job at McDonald's, which has taught me about working with others, as well as coping with pressure. One of the crucial parts of my job is ensuring that customers are satisfied, and occasionally dealing with complaints. I believe the people skills I have gained from McDonald's will help me in other aspects of my life.

I regularly attend my local church and Christian youth group. In July 2007, I had the opportunity to go to Kosovo for a fortnight with other members of the youth group. Our aim was to help widows and orphans affected by the Yugoslav Civil War and the ethnic cleansing of Kosovans in 1999. We redecorated homes and schools, ran children's clubs, distributed aid, and visited a Roma gypsy camp. It was a very profound and moving experience, and one I hope to repeat at some point in the future. This is the reason for my deferred entry to university. I plan to spend a few months fundraising, and then return to Kosovo for the remainder of the year to continue the work we started there.

I believe that I am a confident and enthusiastic person who would benefit greatly from studying at university. I am passionate about the law and would like to have a career as a lawyer. I also have a keen sense of justice and an interest in Sociology and Criminology and would consider working with the Prison Service or the CPS. I think that studying Law at university would help me make the best possible use of my analytical and writing skills, and that a career in Law would satisfy my need to help others.

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This personal statement was written by Pebbles for application in 2008.

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This PS secured me good offers from Sheffield (for two courses), Leicester and Nottingham Trent. Hope it helps you as much as it helped me!

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this statement is S.H.I.T.

this statement is S.H.I.T.

its a bit crappy. scrap the

its a bit crappy. scrap the whole thing and start agen!!

well organized

the PS is really well organized but to be honest it doesnt reallt attract me also its not interesting but the main point is taht the first sentence isnt attractive

its aitee

its aitee

Pebbles did you get any

Pebbles did you get any offers from universities? if so which ones?

This p.s is okay, I can tell

This p.s is okay, I can tell you care about other people and like to help them, I like that about you, it's nice.

Lol thanks :)

Lol thanks :)

My offers are:
Sheffield (Law): AAA
Sheffield (Law and Criminology): AAB - my first choice
Leicester (Law): AAB
Nott Trent (Law with Criminology): 280 points - my insurance choice

Hope that helps!

nice

Hey dude, like the ps, was very good and personal, and highlights you as a well-rounded individual.
I'm going nottingham trent for law with criminology so could possibly see you there! Good luck, scott

neave

this personal statement is sooooooo good!

sounds a bit like me... lol

it's a sweet application form. i like it
i'm impressed that you've done so much, my only issue is that not enough relivent information was in it.
relating to your course choice but hey, you've got slots in uni's right?
so who am i to talk... im still trying to make mine...

you need to relate to the law

you need to relate to the law aspect

really good ps gt good offers

really good ps gt good offers an al need help want to some voluntary work at police station how would go about geting that sorted sori get use forums so writing it all here any1 else that can't use the forums

heyy i thought the PS was

heyy i thought the PS was really good,
im having difficulty trying to write mine but i saw that u got into sheffield for law and criminology
thats one of my choices!
i was wondering what your results were?
Thanks

this is very good, it helped

this is very good, it helped me plan my statement. thankyou.

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