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Biomedical Science Personal Statement Example 11
Ever since I looked at my first organism down a microscope I have had this arge to know what else is around me that I was not able to see with my naked eyes.The fascination of looking down a microscope and discovering many small organisms living without us knowing their presence makes one want to learn more about them.Know how they survive, how to destroy them,if they are hameful to us, and even know how to prevent them from coming back.This and the fact that there has being a growing number of deaths caused by cancer,a disease am sure that a cure will be found, one can't stop and see what its doing to peoples lives.I believe studying this course will enable me to be close to finding its cure so as to bring joy to others.
I chose to study in the United Kingdom because of its reputation of having the top research institute for diseases, IBMS. Education wise United Kingdom has the top universites of the world. While studying in the United Kingdom I also have a chance to improve my English language by intreracting and communicating with differnt international students from all over the world.
I am currently studying a Univesity Foundation Programme at David Game College. I am taking Pure Maths, Statistics, followed by my major modules in Chemistry, Biology, Pyhsics. The course will benefit me to succeed at university.
After eventually gaining a Bachelor Degree in Biomedical Science, this will also enable me in futhering my degree by doing Biomedical Engineering because I find the joining of engineering and life facinating. Both of this courses strongly appeal to me. Not only will both of this courses help me in the way of possibly completing my goal, I believeit will also help me as a person.
In my spare time I enjoy reading a good medical mystery noval,drawing whatever I can, I play sports like basketball, football and a bit of tennis now and then.Even though some of my spare time activities do not deal with my course am ready to learn. At being social I would say am average. At times I do visit museums with my sister so as to get a feel of science.
In conclusion, I would like to say I am a very ambitious, highly movtivated and enthusiastic person. Am ready for the challenges that are awaiting for me in university. I have the ability to succeed and strive for excellence in everthing I do. Am loking forward to studying this career fulfuliment degree which will enable me to achieve my goal that I know will have an impact on the world.
This personal statement was written by noone for application in 2008.
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Um. I don't know what to make
Wed, 22/04/2009 - 08:48
Um. I don't know what to make of it. I find it a bit cheesy if i'm honest, especially the first section.
Sun, 21/06/2009 - 23:19
THIS IS SO BAD
what a bellend
Fri, 10/07/2009 - 12:33
what a bellend
i agree with the others- this
Tue, 18/08/2009 - 20:08
i agree with the others- this personal statement is really really bad!! i ope this person had amended it hugely before sending it off! this line for example- "I chose to study in the United Kingdom because of its reputation of having the top research
institute for diseases, IBMS. Education wise United Kingdom has the top universites of the
world. While studying in the United Kingdom I also have a chance to improve my English
language by intreracting and communicating with differnt international students from all over
the world." is a complete waste of precious space- the universities don't want to know why you have picked the UK to study- they want to know why you want to study the course!! and yes- course- NOT why this university- so please future international students pick up on this.
Needed to be proof read!!!
Tue, 22/09/2009 - 21:19
Needed to be proof read!!! What is an arge? Urge begins with a u!
i find the punctuation and
Mon, 23/08/2010 - 14:59
i find the punctuation and sentence structure slightly sloppy for something that is sooooooo important in life. This has to get you into university so poor punctuation is shocking.
Mon, 15/08/2011 - 14:06
Catastrophe!!!! This statement is even embarrassing to read let alone submitt to a University.
the above comments are fake
Tue, 27/11/2012 - 12:07
any comment above mine with random letters are clearly fake and as such should be treated as fake
Tue, 23/07/2013 - 21:58
Im obliged for the post.Thanks Again.
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