Nursing Personal Statement

I found it quite hard to find personal statements so I thought I would donate mine!! Hope it's useful

Nursing is a very challenging and demanding career, however I feel the rewards would be great
and that I am ready to embark on this career. I am eager to pursue a career in which I am able
to help and care for people, becoming a nurse would allow me to fulfil this ambition. Nursing
is a career for dedicated, reliable, trusting people who are able to develop relationships
with patients quickly. I have these skills and I genuinely want to make a difference to
people, to assist them and their families through difficult times when they are at their most
vulnerable. The role of nursing is changing as nurses are far more involved in the welfare of
patients and this is placing more responsibility on nurses. I am confident of embracing this
challenge and to take advantage of these changes and opportunities and use them to further my
career.

At school I am involved in the Duke of Edinburgh scheme and have completed bronze and silver
levels. Aspects of the Duke of Edinburgh involved working as part of a group, this has helped
me become an effective team player which I believe will be useful in the nursing environment
as it will be necessary to use this strength to communicate successfully with other health
professionals to determine what level of care is best for a patient. I am also involved in the
music department as part of two choirs and a guitar group. I perform learning support once a
week with a girl with additional support needs. This involves undertaking activities with her
and supporting her to communicate difficulties when she is finding things challenging. This is
very rewarding as I can see what a difference it makes for her to have someone who is willing
to listen, and has made me realise how important this skill is when caring for people. Another
activity I find rewarding is performing in-class support with a second year science class.

I am a young leader at Aberlady Rainbows and Guides and this is very valuable to me as I
interact with the girls and participate in activities with them. It has greatly increased my
confidence as I often have to talk to the girls in a group setting and this has developed my
interpersonal skills. I am also involved in the peer education scheme '4' which involves going
to different Guiding units and raising awareness of issues through activities and games. This
has been incredibly beneficial for my confidence and my planning and organisational skills.
These skills have been developed as I have to co-ordinate the sessions as well as talking to a
group of people that I am not familiar with. As one of only two in4mers in East Lothian this
role is very demanding.

I have been employed as a waitress for three years in the local hotel. This has been excellent
for my interpersonal skills as it involves talking to people I am not familiar with. A skill
that will be transferable to nursing. I have also undertaken work experience, through school,
at Harlawhill Day Care Centre. This gave me a useful insight into the caring profession and
has increased my motivation to work within it. I organised my own work experience at the
Edington Cottage Hospital and this gave me an idea of what working in a hospital setting will
be like. Both experiences served to fuel my desire to gain entry to the nursing profession. I
also plan to work as a nursing auxiliary through the nurse bank next summer.

In the future I may wish to pursue a career in Paediatric nursing and I feel that an adult
nursing degree will be the first step in giving me this opportunity. I am deeply passionate
about nursing and I am already looking forward to a long and fulfilling career in this field.

I am the first person in my family to pursue further education.

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This personal statement was written by laura257 for application in 2008.

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Wow! by guest at 25/10/2007 11:44:21

I really want to become a nurse but i've been ill for three years with a stress related illness which has stopped me getting much experience.
I'm worried now i won't excepted but thank you for letting me see your example it was a great help!

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Thankyou by guest at 26/10/2007 15:21:46

I have read your statement and have noted a few lines of yours, hope you dont mind im not too good and writing.

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thanks by guest at 26/10/2007 18:05:42

I'm doing a 'career portfolio' and was really stuck on my personal statement. Thanks for sharing yours, it gave me an idea of where I need to start.

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Comment by guest at 26/10/2007 18:13:11

really good. thanks

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Comment by guest at 28/10/2007 02:28:48

this was really useful. thankyou

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Comment by guest at 28/10/2007 13:05:54

Thank you, i found this very detailed and useful

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Comment by guest at 28/10/2007 22:03:19

Very good but I still don't know where to start

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Comment by guest at 29/10/2007 13:39:35

Really great personal statement, thank you. x

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Really helpful by guest at 29/10/2007 15:55:13

I wasn't sure on how to start my personal statement and if i even wanted to be a nurse but reading this has made be sure that this is the path i want to go down so thank you!

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Comment by guest at 01/11/2007 08:55:27

Brilliant!
It has gave me a few ideas of what to write, thanks for sharing =) xXx

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inspirational by guest at 03/11/2007 22:41:24

I have found it extremely difficult to find a starting point to my personal statement but after reading yours it has really helped me to begin and it just started to flow when i knew what to write. thanks!

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thankyou by guest at 05/11/2007 09:26:27

thankyou your personal statement has helped me greatly.

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Comment by guest at 07/11/2007 09:15:27

this is a similar career path to what i want to do, (paramedic) so thanks for the example on helping me with my statement.

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thanx by guest at 07/11/2007 17:52:18

Thanks for this, i read through your statememnt and began to wonder if i had actually wrote it in my sleep lol, you seemed to have lead a very simular life to mine.

Your statement has reminded me of things i did when i was growing up. It's made writing my personal statement a lot easier. thanks

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Comment by guest at 08/11/2007 11:14:55

Thanks letting me see an example of a personal statement, it was a great help :) thanks

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king by guest at 08/11/2007 15:38:32

thank you, your persenal statment helped me alot ...

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Comment by guest at 08/11/2007 20:14:44

if only we had more people like you, reading your statement really helped me thank you, my tutor had stressed me out so much about my personal statement and you made it easier thanks again xxx

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Thank You by guest at 12/11/2007 20:56:22

laura, my namesake, thank you. you have really helped me compose my satement. something ive struggled with for over 12 months!!!!
thank you

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Comment by guest at 13/11/2007 15:36:59

thank you for shairng your personal statement as i want to a follow a career in midwifery and this sent my mind racing with ideas as to what to include in mine, so thanx very much x

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Comment by guest at 13/11/2007 20:24:18

Was a great help, shame there aren't more! Thanks x

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sowi for coping lol by guest at 13/11/2007 23:57:38

heya i copied ur first paragraph but ima changing a bit a8 fanks alot

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thanks!!!! by guest at 15/11/2007 15:59:15

aw hi thanks alot dot was pure class!!!! i was really worried bout ritin mine but uve helpd me loads hope you dnt mind if i tak bits out bt der too good not to!!!!! tanx again xxxx

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Impressive statement ! by guest at 15/11/2007 20:34:26

Thanks for the sneaky peek.You sound like you'll make a great nurse. Best of luck !

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thanx billion times by guest at 16/11/2007 21:04:50

you have really made my day, i had no clue on how to state. thanx again

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=D.unki by guest at 17/11/2007 15:26:05

I was so stuck all my m8s hve alredy riten their statemnts nd i ad no clu hw 2 strt urs hlpd me alot,thnk u. al th best wth ur career.

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Comment by guest at 20/11/2007 20:23:02

very good

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Comment by guest at 21/11/2007 14:53:31

Wow thank you so much for the help! I was totally struggling until I found this you've given me inspiration for my own personal statement. Thanks :)

xxx

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Comment by guest at 25/11/2007 16:37:06

As a matter of fact, you have done an incredible job by putting forward this piece of writing. I could not bring out in writing a good personal statement but after, I read yours, there was a great solution. I am now, able to write a personal statement. Thanks.

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don't copy cheats by guest at 27/11/2007 12:26:48

this is a really amazing personal statement and laura has done a great job.It was very generous of her to put it online but i am disappointed that some unfair cheats are copying it. It is brilliant to use this for inspiration but write your own statment and don't be lazy.

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Comment by guest at 30/11/2007 21:15:14

hi guys this personal statement website is excellent for advising people about how to go about their personal statement but please please dont copy them as UCAS have the technology to to scan people's personal statements which can be linked to websites and can actually decline an application for plagiarism! just a tip

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Comment by guest at 02/12/2007 18:34:08

Blessed!!! you personal statement is not just good but an inspiration. exactelly what I was looking for to help me write mine. Thank you for sharing.

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Twisted by guest at 02/12/2007 22:10:55

Thanks so much for sharing this, it's a really good personal statement and I learnt from it! Goodluck for the future!

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so good by guest at 03/12/2007 23:44:09

it a wow many thanks

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thank you by guest at 04/12/2007 22:33:15

Did not know where to start with writing a personal statement - thank you for sharing yours, it has been a great help.

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Thanks!!!!!!!!! by guest at 05/12/2007 10:41:43

Thanks for donating you personal statement!!its a help!!

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Comment by guest at 10/12/2007 20:49:18

this is absolutely brilliant, thankyou so much.

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thanks hun ! by guest at 11/12/2007 14:19:45

thank you this was a great help. i have really struggled with getting started and now after looking at yours i am on a role cheers xxx

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Comment by guest at 12/12/2007 01:09:49

thanks for sharing ur statement i thought it was really good an gave me some great ideas for my own!!!!!!!!

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kirsty by guest at 17/12/2007 12:06:32

this statement is really good!!

thank u

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Very well written and seems honest, a great help!

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Comment by guest at 05/01/2008 19:50:27

What a fab personal statement. I have been trying to write mine for weeks now and yours gave me the inspiration to finish it off and know i was on the right lines. Thanks

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This personal statement was really good and helped me structure my dtatement better!
Thank you!

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Comment by guest at 07/01/2008 13:52:01

many thanks.I've been able to see 'more of me' since reading your points which has greatly helped. x

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delmmy by guest at 10/01/2008 19:20:20

this is a great personal statment! thank you so much for sharing it!

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Thank You by guest at 12/01/2008 21:46:41

Really was having a problem then read your statement and gained the courage to carry on. Thank you again.

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Comment by guest at 15/01/2008 01:51:08

nicely written.

wishing you the best of luck! ^_^

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abi by guest at 15/01/2008 03:08:04

this is a very good one am goind to use some of it for my statment well done

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Thankyou by guest at 15/01/2008 18:49:46

What a great help this as been,ur an absolute star hun!! I was so stressed out before i found this. Good luk wid nursing n ope u go on to get da job u want. x

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thank you for sharing this wonderful personal statement....it really helped me a lot in my career..thanks Godbless

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Comment by guest at 22/01/2008 15:02:14

A really good personal statement! This is the second time I've had to write a personal statement - I study tourism at uni now, and have decided its just not for me - and it doesn't get any easier the second time round!! So well done on this attempt!! i hope you get accepted into your chosen course :) x

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thank you by guest at 28/01/2008 00:59:45

i'm also doing my personal statement, thanks for sharing yours..i also quoted few lines in your statement because i am not that good in writing..thanks again!

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VERY HELPFUL by guest at 31/01/2008 18:12:56

JUST WANT TO SAY THANKS YOUR PERSONAL STATEMENT IS REALLY GOOGD, I HAVE NOTED SOME OF YOUR HARD WORK HOPE YOU DONT MIND THANKS ALOT

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Thanx.. by guest at 11/03/2008 22:34:41

Hey, this is really great, i love the first paragraph think i am going to use it. Thanx alot good luck!

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Comment by guest at 12/03/2008 15:16:55

I am planning on applying for uni next year i too am the first in the family to pursue this. I was terrified of making such a fool of my self on my statment but reading yours has giveen such confidence to try again.
thankyou

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Comment by guest at 13/03/2008 11:10:45

very good statement, thanks for the idea.

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how can i write my personal statement by guest at 15/03/2008 16:34:15

am nurse and would like to continue my study in uk in oncology speciatlty and i dont know how to stat my statement .plze help me

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very aspiring by guest at 15/03/2008 23:06:57

i was just in the middle of writting my statement when i thought of sighting a few examples luckly for me, i found you.now i have to start all over. i can assure you will be a good role modle in your family. keep it up, you have a future. thanks

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Thank u for sharing your statement its now kick started me to do mine!

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very helpful by guest at 08/04/2008 11:01:42

thank you .it was really helpful..

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You're statement has really helped...Thanks! Now i know where to begin!

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Thank you it really has helped.

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Thanks i had no idea how to start.May God contuine to bless you

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I really appreciate your effort to contribute such a simple but effective personal statement. Its very helpful. Thanks for guiding

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Comment by guest at 27/05/2008 23:41:28

a very good statment

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thank you by guest at 25/06/2008 19:48:48

I am just finishing my port folio and the personal statement was filling me with dread,your example was brilliant,thank you for sharing xx

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Comment by guest at 30/06/2008 20:55:30

Brilliant! Many Thnx (=

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Thank you by guest at 16/07/2008 18:35:22

have to say was so stuck on what to write thank you for the brain motivation cause its not easy to hype your self up

thanks you

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Thank you! by guest at 31/07/2008 02:28:17

Your personal statement has been extremely useful in guiding me. I didn't know where to begin but thanks to you, I am on my way to writing a great personal statement. Thank you so much!

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thanx i was really stuck on what they would expect to write in our personal statements but reading yours really helped me with how it should be done

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thank you for this it really helped!!!
i have been able to finsh my P.S. for university now! :D
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nurse by guest at 04/08/2008 20:39:59

thanks this was amazing really helped your a star xxx

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You have very generously helped a lot of people including me, thanks a lot and good luck to everyone x

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Thank you by guest at 01/09/2008 16:01:39

This has been a great help with my opening paragraph, thanks for all your help :)

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Comment by guest at 02/09/2008 14:05:54

did you get into uni using this personal statement?

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Comment by guest at 06/09/2008 22:15:03

It is too wordy and distracts from the main points that the author wants to express.

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thank you. . x by guest at 07/09/2008 21:34:32

your personal statement was really great help thanks a lot! i've been struggling on how to start it and looking at yours made it very easy for me! it also made me very sure about choosing this career! x x x x thanks again

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thanks x x i found this a great help as i really never knew where to start first your statement looked so professional hope mine can to!

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Thanks by guest at 23/09/2008 09:49:48

Im currently studying health and social care in college and i reli want to do peadiatric nursing. Thanks for your personal statement it reli helped me.x

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this is really useful. i have been working on my statement for the past month and had no idea what to put in it. thanks. its really good.

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Thank you so much for sharing your statement, i found it very helpful

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Comment by guest at 02/10/2008 18:14:56

This is an amazing personal statement, it has really given me a good starting!

Thanks for sharing it :)

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Comment by guest at 04/10/2008 15:12:58

Cheers for letting me have a look - hopefully i can start mine - only problem i know what i want to say but i just cant write it on paper!!

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you have sucha gud statement, it helps alot! thanxz! all d besttt....

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i like your statement thanks it helped me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thankyou by guest at 08/10/2008 13:52:22

Thank you for sharing this comment, I found this really useful as I will be applying for University soon and I needed to start my personal statement asap. I helped me gain an understandin on how to start it and set one out. So thanks again.
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Comment by guest at 09/10/2008 11:37:42

THANX I have been struggling on this for a bit now an ive found this really helpful. Its got my brain ticking now lol

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Comment by guest at 10/10/2008 11:12:43

thankyou it was so helpful to read this as i am really srtuggling to write my midwifery personal statement. it is very well constructed and interesting to read. a great help thankyou xxx
Shauna

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Comment by guest at 20/10/2008 14:26:10

Thankyou very much this is a brilliant personal statement and help me on the right tracks what to write. Thankyou again x

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thanks by guest at 23/10/2008 14:17:26

hi thanks, i have just i a look at your personal statement. i found it really helpful, i have been struggling on starting mine,but now no where and how to begin. thanks alot a good luck with your career.

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Comment by guest at 26/10/2008 11:27:12

thanks for letting us all have a wee swatch at a personal statement for nursing as the schools aren't really prepared for it and don't have any helpful notes so it was VERY helpful to see yours. thanks again.

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thanks alot by guest at 30/10/2008 16:09:19

thank you so much for this my friends have done thers and i was reli struggling. it wasnt stuff to write about my self it was what to include i was struggling with!
so thanks alot!!! :-)

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Comment by guest at 30/10/2008 19:05:47

This was a very god personal statement and i think alot of us have benefited from it :D
Thanks again!!
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Comment by guest at 02/11/2008 14:22:49

thank you for sharing, best example I have seen so far!x

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smile by guest at 03/11/2008 12:02:13

thank lds ur a star lol

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Comment by guest at 03/11/2008 16:05:54

i am young girl who aged 18 years old i would like to become a nurse i am learning in health and social care i thing it`s easy but i am not friendly

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fantastic by guest at 03/11/2008 16:14:13

iam saamiyah i live in england i am student at college of north east london i study health and social care i get upset when i first started but now i am like a teacher i am not really teacher just like and i hope to be come anurse

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thanx found this very useful by guest at 05/11/2008 12:33:35

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Very goood by guest at 12/11/2008 15:47:04

Thank you so much 4 sharing this with us!! Realy helped and its really good xx

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Comment by guest at 13/11/2008 10:29:14

Its alrite like
nothing special

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thank u by guest at 16/11/2008 18:54:18

this really helped me get started!
thanks!

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God Bless by guest at 17/11/2008 00:08:39

thanks your personal statement really helped me

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Comment by guest at 20/11/2008 15:04:14

thank you. this has helped alot.

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Comment by guest at 23/11/2008 18:41:05

hi i found this statement so much help in finishing my statement and good luck in your future career
thanks

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Janine by guest at 27/11/2008 17:49:23

Thank you that was really helpful. i hope to do nursing next year but was really struggling with what to say. urs is really well written, u seem to have loads of experience!

thanks very much

xxx

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Amazing by guest at 30/11/2008 18:19:21

Hello I just read your personal statement and its really good i wish you the best success in your life you will go far! Lots of love Natasha xxxxx

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Thanks by guest at 01/12/2008 03:41:29

Thanks you so much for sharing your personal statement. I was was suck in starting mine and yours helped facilitate the starting points that I needed. It was truly a blessing for me. Thanks again.

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Great by guest at 03/12/2008 14:59:24

Thank you. It was really useful and has helped me with a starting point. thanks once a again x

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Comment by guest at 08/12/2008 18:36:28

Thanks for sharing your personal statement, like many people I was stuck with starting mine. Yours has really has helped me out. So once again, thank you!

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Comment by guest at 11/12/2008 21:50:39

what an excelent personal statement, thanks for yr help.
all the best for yr future x

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Comment by guest at 15/12/2008 10:11:59

i found this statement really really helpful thanks!
wish u all th best!

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good on you by guest at 15/12/2008 14:16:14

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Great by guest at 26/12/2008 19:31:09

Thanks dis helped alot.now i definitely ave an idea of wat to write!

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Comment by guest at 05/01/2009 18:37:05

this statement show's some promise. However it does go on abit in some places and overstates emotions.

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amazing job! by guest at 05/01/2009 19:32:33

Great Statement, got me out of my "block"
Please use this as an inspiration piece, do not copy her work, make it your own.
Thanks Laura now I have a much clearer idea of a starting point and development of ideas.

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Comment by guest at 20/01/2009 14:27:06

did you get in?

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Comment by guest at 23/01/2009 13:10:21

i have been out of education for a few years now looking after my mum wit cancer. your personal statement has helped me out so much... i was mind boggled , out of practice writing essays. thankyou x

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Comment by guest at 28/01/2009 22:13:30

Fabulous, just what I needed. I can't get past the first line. Hope you managed to get in.
Thanks.

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it really help by guest at 06/02/2009 13:46:59

u are such a wonderful person it indeed help me.

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thanks by guest at 03/03/2009 16:36:32

this statement has really helped me think of some of my own expereiences that i forgot about and also bought into perspective how easy it is to write a personal statement when you have a great one infront of you to give a guideline how to start the bloody thing thanks alot it was a real help XXXxxxxXXXX

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Comment by guest at 03/04/2009 12:27:46

Thanx helped me get started x

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Comment by guest at 06/04/2009 15:59:58

good statement. it is actually social work i want 2 study and havent been able to find a personal statement in that field but your statement has helped me construct my own statement especially your intro and the skills and activities you have participated in. thank you

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Comment by guest at 10/05/2009 18:14:15

thank you SO much for posting this, i've been agonising over my personal statement for weeks!
good luck with your nursing career!
M x

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can you please delete this by guest at 14/06/2009 20:48:55

my brothes girlfriend used some of it and shes been caught

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Comment by guest at 14/07/2009 11:51:01

If she copied it outright she deserves to get caught. Use it for ideas not copy and paste, idiot.

Anyway, good personal statement, very useful.

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Comment by guest at 21/07/2009 12:04:23

thanks, it is really helpful

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Comment by guest at 17/08/2009 18:42:05

hy, i am not sure if i am strong enough to be a nurse. I am passionate about this job role however dont feel i am strong enough.

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this is so helpful by guest at 09/09/2009 07:12:59

i had no idea how to really set out my personal statement but yours gave me a good idea of how i could set it out
thank you XD

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Comment by guest at 16/09/2009 06:14:50

WOW!!! your personal statement is wicked!!!
its helped me plan mine out
thank for adding it up
tc
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Comment by guest at 17/09/2009 12:36:53

This is realy good! thanks! :)

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:) by guest at 22/09/2009 17:28:16

Welldone that's really good! i'mthe only person i know doing nursing and reallly needed some ideas! this is very good! thankyou

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Great help!!!! by guest at 23/09/2009 19:57:27

I was struggling to start my personal statement but since reading yours it has triggered apart of my brain I didnt think worked!!! Thank you very much!!!!!

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Comment by guest at 12/10/2009 13:08:23

thank you so much, your personal statement has helped me to get started. leanne x

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Thanks by guest at 29/10/2009 09:35:13

This Personal Statement is really good. It helped me alot with my Personal Statement. Thanks again xx

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Wow that was Brilliant! by guest at 18/12/2009 16:43:21

that waz great help! Thank you :)

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cool statement! by guest at 10/01/2010 19:28:17

thanks this really helped i used it as a rough guideline for my statement! x

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Comment by guest at 14/01/2010 18:45:04

you are amazing thanks so so much i was stressed out till i read yours its a fantastic help your a star xxx

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That was really helpful by guest at 09/02/2010 15:31:22

very good. I feel better now

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personal statement by guest at 10/02/2010 16:59:22

hi there, i have just read your personal statement and i thought it was amazing, everything i was thinking in my head but in so much more detail and brilliant wording, i hope you dont mind but i used a few of your lines to fit into my CV, i would love to be a nurse some day, i keep applying for auxilary positions and i have not heard back off any of them, and in time i am hoping to enroll for the nursing course at preston university! Thank you so much for posting your personal statement to help others, i really hope you have got the career you yearned for, you do deserve it, many thanks Claire xx

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Thanks by guest at 27/03/2010 20:04:00

Thank you for shareing youre personal statment its very good good luck to you with everything you do x

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Comment by guest at 29/05/2010 19:03:58

I've thought about applying for uni for over a year, and kept putting it off, simply because I didnt have a clue where to start with my personal statement..THANK YOU!!!

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Comment by guest at 04/07/2010 22:03:37

i really want to get into the career of nursing except i have only decided this, and have not gt the relevant work experience, i only have the time of this summer. can yu please advise me what to do please?

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Comment by guest at 23/07/2010 10:03:26

This is briiiiiiilliant. I just fell in love with it. Thank you so much for posting your personal statement, what a difference it made for me .God bless.

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nurse by guest at 21/08/2010 12:26:44

Very nice goal statement

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Comment by guest at 23/08/2010 13:56:58

thank you for your help, iam going to apply to be a pediatric nurse, i did my nvq3 childcare and i worked as a nursery office, but my dream is to be a pediatric nurse. jenny

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Comment by guest at 31/08/2010 19:37:42

How long do personal statments have to be?

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Comment by guest at 27/09/2010 14:03:30

There's no minimum length but they can't be more than 47 lines or 4000 characters.

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thank you by guest at 28/09/2010 22:48:03

your personal statement has helped me a lot thank you so much

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Comment by guest at 29/09/2010 18:54:04

such a life saver! i had no idea where to start and this has given me some really good ideas :)

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Immii by Immii at 29/09/2010 23:06:09

Myyy GODDD! (In relief)- your such a big help!! And thank you for sharing your own, its very helpful indeed. Reading your personal statement made me feel more comfortable then worried; as i had no idea what to write before. Your such a life saver!!! thanks! :)

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FAB :0) by guest at 08/10/2010 22:41:43

This has helped me get an idea, thanx xxx

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thanks alot. by guest at 10/10/2010 13:09:38

your personal statement really helped me. thank you x

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Wow!!!! Lovely personal statement by guest at 22/10/2010 14:22:26

I am really so glad to read this statement as it contains what I was looking for my statement as year3 student nurse. I say thanks to the person who contriputed it.

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thankz! by guest at 09/11/2010 11:30:08

thanks alot for putting your personal statement on.i realy appreciate it. Its so nice to meet such good people like yourself.

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Comment by guest at 11/11/2010 14:39:44

thanx so much, help alot didnt have a clue whot to put in but it realy help me xxx

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Comment by guest at 24/11/2010 11:15:51

Thank you nurse! Helped me alot.

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Comment by guest at 15/02/2011 12:10:58

brilliant well done! sounds very professional! i have taken notes on my statement for my first nursing job... thanks for your help!

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wow! by guest at 05/07/2011 12:25:50

this is actually the best personal statement

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Good Statement by guest at 27/07/2011 05:02:05

I have been searching for ideas and help in my nursing school application. This is the best letter I have found! Thank you for posting it, it has been very helpful.

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thanks by guest at 24/09/2011 09:00:18

i needed something to give me a head start,im grateful

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Comment by guest at 27/09/2011 19:14:27

Thank you so much, big help! Didn't know how hard it would be to write a Personal Statement, so thanks again!

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Comment by guest at 12/10/2011 20:27:56

Thankyou very much for posting this, it has really helped me get ideas on how to write what i want to say :)

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WOW!! by guest at 20/11/2011 12:36:36

That was really inspiring to me and it gave some real pointers on how to go about filling up my UCAS Personal Statement in Nursing!!!
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You!!!

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thankyou by guest at 09/07/2012 10:48:30

wow seriosuly you have saved my life, and hope you do well in your life, and thank you, this was so usefull and has helped me a lot... and good luck with your nursing career.

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Comment by guest at 10/09/2012 22:42:42

Your statement is quite useful to students especially those of us who want be in nursing proffession. Well done

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Thank you for sharing! by guest at 08/11/2012 01:52:53

Your example really did help me in developing my own personal statement for my professional portfolio for Nursing.

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Comment by guest at 21/11/2012 11:48:16

"Nursing is a very challenging and demanding career" is one of the 10 most overused opening sentences in personal statements according to UCAS!

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Not Credible! by guest at 07/11/2013 17:50:26

I would not employ this person. These are clichés which centre around what she finds rewarding. It is repetitive and dull. The age-old adage in writing of "show, not tell" holds good here. What makes a good possible nurse is not just commitment (and you can't prove this by going on about it) but the influences which have gone into your life as well as your experiences. Commitment is a "given" and "rewarding" is implicit. Better to reveal the type of person you actually are..

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